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Writer's pictureAdeena Khan

Peer Blog Reviews.

Updated: May 9, 2021

1.

-Esha Mufeez


As far as I might be concerned, composing a journal or writing daily diary is all I’ve known and is all I’ve ever wrote in for what seems like forever. The feeling checks and balance for people like me who normally endures and needs profitability can be useful. I believe there ought to be a friend whom you can say, bluster out your day, your feelings, and in written whatever you have shared is protected with them. No judgments, no remarks just a simple gesture of acceptance and acknowledgment. This is the manner by which I think a nonliving thing in a type of certain pages can facilitate your psyche.

Obviously it isn’t important to compose if your journal exist in a human structure. You are adequately fortunate in the event that you have that one friend. Be that as it may, on the off chance that you don’t, you don’t have to feel terrible about yourself. You can be friends with anything. Living or nonliving thing. Doesn’t actually matter. I’ve generally had a sense of security with my journal. It holds a universe of my minds, my feelings. I typically bluster my heart out when I’m miserable or happy. Nothing in the middle.

Writing a diary can assist you with being beneficial. Sounds buzzword yet it’s in reality evident. Possibly you composed a daily agenda or how you went through your day. It will be useful from various perspectives. You will have a clear vision of your daily schedule and contemplations, and what you need to change and include in it. Furthermore, being an understudy, it’s really gotten rushed to plan and complete everything on schedule. So to keep up your scholarly pressure, this is everything exercise you can manage to help yourself.



Review:


This piece of writing is not something to research about, rather is about a girl pouring her heart out and guiding others on how to deal with hardships through the way she finds the most reliable and best. The writer, Esha, informs the reader how writing a diary can be so helpful to everyone, not just her. And this is what I like about this essay. She shares something which is often thought of as a personal thing and makes sure that whoever is going through something, happy or sad, gets to know a healthy way to cope with it. Through writing a diary. There were no facts and figures in this so there is nothing to fact check, or plagiarize about. As this is solely a personal opinion of someone.


2.


-Laiba Samad


Would you like to press the rewind and play button for last year if given a chance? Probably No, right? No one would want to back to the year with some of the most dreadful and distressing incidents. It is not just the ‘Global Pandemic’ that we are talking about, but it is also some of the most devastating news that broke the world. Be it the Australian Bushfire, Beirut Explosion, Pakistan Airline Crash, or the death of many known public figures, 2020 just couldn’t get any worse. The natural disasters in 2020 brought catastrophic results for millions across nations in 2020. They not only caused thousands of deaths but also billions of paper notes which caused shaky effects on numerous economies.

Who would’ve imagined that the world will come to such a still? No one would’ve ever thought that the most ‘Positive’ word in the world will turn out to be so negative. Nor would have anyone thought about how Social Distancing will become the new normal. It was difficult and is still is. People have now adjusted to the new trends which is like the biggest change one witnesses. It is no more the same as it used to be all the way. With online learning capturing the traditional methods, the closure of fine-dine restaurants, restrictions on public events, people have adapted and so have evolved for better. Everyone now realises the value of existence and how important it is to have your loved ones by your side.

We’ve tried our best and we can still try to modify ourselves according to the constant changes so that all the hardships and difficulties can one day fade away.



Review:


This piece of writing by Laiba Samad portrays how the year 2020 and 2021 changed everything so drastically. She briefs about the major events that occurred during these two years and how the global pandemic has changed everything. Everything she wrote about the briefing of the events is correct, and are facts that were reported to the world everywhere. I love how she points out how ‘positive’ is not taken so positively anymore. She points out the new norms that nobody is used to but should get used to, and ends the essay with a very motivating line of moving on and keeping the hope alive that everything will be okay. I really liked how it ended on a positive aspect.


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These winters and cigarettes,

the hidden little sun shine


Cloud is shattered on the sky,

For the birds to fly high


Those leaves upon the ground,

I lost what i just found


Ebad Samad



Review:


This poem stood out from the rest to me, because nobody else has written one. And honestly, I am a fan of poems as I write some myself as well. Again, this is a poem so there are no fact checks about it. Neither any plagiarism issues because a lot of words can be similar yet mean differently to everyone in such sort of poems. I really like the scene it portrays, giving a very calming feel to everything. Grave yet soothing, something everyone can also relate to. In moments of grief, everything seems so enhanced, from nature to feelings. And the last line does tell how one has just lost something dear to them, let it be a human or a thing or a feeling. I like how it is not restricted to just one thing, letting the readers ponder over it and visualize it however they like.










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